An excellent story board. At present your planning is focused, thoughtful, indicates creative and intellectual involvement and strong knowledge and understanding of genre.
Well done also for identifying weaknesses in the rough edit of your thriller opening.
I suggest within the next week you add a post about your use of ambient light (adds sense of reality); another post on your references to film noir and chiaroscuro lighting in the flashback to include the purpose of the flashback.
A post explaining the way your use of diegetic and non diegetic sound amplifies the genre and suspense.
An excellent story board. At present your planning is focused, thoughtful, indicates creative and intellectual involvement and strong knowledge and understanding of genre.
ReplyDeleteWell done also for identifying weaknesses in the rough edit of your thriller opening.
I suggest within the next week you add a post about your use of ambient light (adds sense of reality); another post on your references to film noir and chiaroscuro lighting in the flashback to include the purpose of the flashback.
A post explaining the way your use of diegetic and non diegetic sound amplifies the genre and suspense.