1) Locations. Re “Essex Boys” not a beach, Jason dumps his victim on The Essex Marshes. Include an image of these marshes. There are images on the internet.
2) Soundtrack, could you explain with references to or clips from films where the sound intensifies suspense or gives body to the mise-en-scene.
3) Enigma: The identity of the two predatory thugs! Why are they so intent on cornering the girl? Were they in on the theft of the necklace and has she run off with the loot??
An excellent response Jordan and with revisions I’d suggest Level 4. Your references to research is consistently impressive
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2) Soundtrack, could you explain with references to or clips from films where the sound intensifies suspense or gives body to the mise-en-scene.
3) Enigma: The identity of the two predatory thugs! Why are they so intent on cornering the girl? Were they in on the theft of the necklace and has she run off with the loot??
An excellent response Jordan and with revisions I’d suggest Level 4. Your references to research is consistently impressive